Thank you Shazana you might wanna space that I from that full stop because after a full stop you need to space and then continue writing but so far Thank you for your comment I really appreciate it.
Kia Ora Estel, Helisa here. I would just like to start off with the layouts. I really enjoyed the layout because it really caught my attention and hopefully it catches a lot of other peoples attention too. I do have quite a lot of feed back though. First off, there were a few spelling mistakes and there were a lot of lines that didn't make sense. You used a couple of words in the same sentence over and over again. I suggest for the next time that you proof read and edit your work before you post it. Take Care !
Thank you For your feedback Helisa (Lisa) it means a lot and Yes I will go back and proof read and make sure that when I post again It would be more explainable and understandable to who's reading my Presentations Thanks again for your feedback.. Estel
hi Estel its me Shazana i really enjoyed reading your work you have not very much things to work on.I love your colors that you added onto your work
ReplyDeleteThank you Shazana you might wanna space that I from that full stop because after a full stop you need to space and then continue writing but so far Thank you for your comment I really appreciate it.
DeleteKia Ora Estel, Helisa here. I would just like to start off with the layouts. I really enjoyed the layout because it really caught my attention and hopefully it catches a lot of other peoples attention too. I do have quite a lot of feed back though. First off, there were a few spelling mistakes and there were a lot of lines that didn't make sense. You used a couple of words in the same sentence over and over again. I suggest for the next time that you proof read and edit your work before you post it. Take Care !
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Thank you For your feedback Helisa (Lisa) it means a lot and Yes I will go back and proof read and make sure that when I post again It would be more explainable and understandable to who's reading my Presentations Thanks again for your feedback.. Estel
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